Deviant Login Shop  Join deviantART for FREE Take the Tour
×

:iconlearningtobefree: More from learningtobefree


More from deviantART



Details

Submitted on
September 28, 2013
File Size
580 bytes
Link
Thumb

Stats

Views
340
Favourites
36 (who?)
Comments
9
Downloads
2
×
I.

it was only under the weight of the stars
that vulnerability personified
and he floated into my arms like an honest promise.

II.

we built castles with our mouths,
safe havens with our teeth.


III.

after all this time, i still can't tell
whether he decorated my life
or vandalized it.

and i wonder if i will ever see him again:
painted and proud with those lips like royalty.
this is short
Add a Comment:
 
:iconuntamedunwanted:
UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Your lovely work was featured here untamedunwanted.deviantart.com…!
Reply
:iconlearningtobefree:
learningtobefree Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2013  Student Writer
ahh, thank you!
Reply
:iconuntamedunwanted:
UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You are most welcome! :)
Reply
:iconlintu47:
lintu47 Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Reply
:iconlearningtobefree:
learningtobefree Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2013  Student Writer
thank you very much :heart:
Reply
:iconlintu47:
lintu47 Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
    My pleasure :happybounce:
Reply
:iconbrokenaisling:
BrokenAisling Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013  Student Writer
It may be short but it says everything a longer one would and more
Reply
:iconlearningtobefree:
learningtobefree Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2013  Student Writer
haha, thanks!
Reply
:iconbrokenaisling:
BrokenAisling Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2013  Student Writer
no prob
Reply
Add a Comment: